Tuesday, November 28, 2006

Lemon and Gin

Sweet lemon and gin.
Her arm tattooed by the sun's
bright tracing in ice.

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Altered 'Your' to 'Her' as the impersonal voice is a bit stronger in haik

3:04 am  
Blogger Unknown said...

Good advice. I've changed it.

6:38 am  

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